CHANGES IN THE NEW SCRIPT!

NEW DEVELOPMENTS IN THE CHANGED SCRIPT___



When I shared my script with our sir he asked me to do some changes like the script was long but he shortened it so I could shot it well. 

  
-Till the highlighted part, the script has been shortened. 

        
                   The finalized script! 

- Title: Echoes of Deception 

[INT. ABANDONED MANSION - NIGHT] 

[The camera glides through the eerie silence of an abandoned mansion, casting long shadows across the decaying walls. Amna , a young woman in her mid-20s, cautiously navigates the dark corridors, her flashlight trembling in her hand.] 

[Cut to Amna's determined face as she approaches at a room at the end of the hallway. With shaky hands, she sifts the flashlight through the room .] 

[Amna steps inside, her flashlight cutting through the darkness. She scans the room, her heart pounding with anticipation. Suddenly a creepy music starts to play for which she explores the room, audible over the sound of her own breathing.]

[Amna freezes, her blood running cold. She shines her flashlight around the room, but sees nothing. The music seems to be coming from all directions.]

Amna: (trembling) Who's there?

[There's no response, just the echo of her own voice bouncing off the walls. Amna's grip tightens on the flashlight as she continues to explore the room, her nerves on edge.]

[Cut to Amna as she reaches a dusty old desk in the corner of the room. She pulls open a drawer and finds a stack of papers, her hands trembling as she sifts through them. Suddenly, she freezes, her eyes widening in disbelief as she finds out an old picture of a girl named Emily, in whose murder case was Amna involved. It showed the presence of Emily in the house, came back to take the revenge of her death.]

[The camera zooms in on the papers, revealing a photograph of Emily standing in front of the mansion, showing that she came back after a long period of time for the revenge from all those who murdered her. The caption reads: "Emily - Gone but not forgotten."]

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