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- Title: Echoes of Deception
[INT. ABANDONED MANSION - NIGHT]
[The camera glides through the eerie silence of an abandoned mansion, casting long shadows across the decaying walls. EMILY, a young woman in her mid-20s, cautiously navigates the dark corridors, her flashlight trembling in her hand.]
EMILY: (whispering to herself) Just a little farther... it has to be here.
[Cut to Emily's determined face as she approaches a locked door at the end of the hallway. With shaky hands, she sifts through a set of keys until she finds the right one. The door creaks open, revealing a pitch-black room beyond.]
[Emily steps inside, her flashlight cutting through the darkness. She scans the room, her heart pounding with anticipation. Suddenly, she hears a faint whisper, barely audible over the sound of her own breathing.]
WHISPER: (echoing) Emily...
[Emily freezes, her blood running cold. She shines her flashlight around the room, but sees nothing. The whisper seems to be coming from all directions.]
EMILY: (trembling) Who's there?
[There's no response, just the echo of her own voice bouncing off the walls. Emily's grip tightens on the flashlight as she continues to explore the room, her nerves on edge.]
[Cut to Emily as she reaches a dusty old desk in the corner of the room. She pulls open a drawer and finds a stack of papers, her hands trembling as she sifts through them. Suddenly, she freezes, her eyes widening in disbelief.]
EMILY: (whispering) No... it can't be.
[The camera zooms in on the papers, revealing a photograph of Emily standing in front of the mansion, taken decades ago. The caption reads: "Emily - Gone but not forgotten."]
[Before Emily can react, she hears a soft chuckle behind her. She spins around, her flashlight illuminating a figure standing in the shadows].

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